Concept - Jack85

[Jack85]

Long time has passed since my last chop around here, but "finally" i'm back. So here is my latest, a full-brush concept which started as a "simple" tuning project on a Smart Roadster base, and then became something totally different; only the perspective is -more or less- the same.
As said everything's brushed, only rims have been realized in 3d (and they're not the best, i know, that's one of the reasons why this car is still a WIP, even if only for a 2-3%), and the grill in the front outakes (i'm going to change it anyway). Still it's not completed at 100%, some problems like jagged lines here and there, some wrong lights, wrong rims, unreal interiors need to be fixed, but these are just minor problems after all, so i'm posting it here also to get the necessary help from you to fix all the possible mistakes and errors you'll find. Now i'll shut up, and here goes the screens, hope you'll enjoy them:

First, the original base:

http://www.funfarm.it/vt/smart_ori.jpg

Then,some WIPS:

http://www.funfarm.it/vt/smartsteps.jpg

And here comes the car, still without a good name, called simply Concept:
ALL IMAGES UPDATED TO 4 june 07

http://www.jack85.altervista.org/_altervista_ht/concept/800concept.jpg

http://www.jack85.altervista.org/_altervista_ht/concept/800bumblebee.jpg

http://www.jack85.altervista.org/_altervista_ht/concept/800dark.jpg

http://www.jack85.altervista.org/_altervista_ht/concept/800white.jpg

High-res:

Concept (http://www.jack85.altervista.org/_altervista_ht/concept/concept.jpg)

"Bumblebee" Ver. (http://www.jack85.altervista.org/_altervista_ht/concept/bumblebee.jpg)

Dark Ver. (http://www.jack85.altervista.org/_altervista_ht/concept/dark.jpg)

"White" Ver. (http://www.jack85.altervista.org/_altervista_ht/concept/white.jpg)

C&C Appreciated! :D

[EM]

WOW , Awesome M8 !!!!!!!
great design and really great brushing skilll !!!

Love It !

[Naj]

Woah craxy or what! Design not to my tsaste but very well done. Brushing good, reflections good too. Rear could pass off as the front!

Nice job overall.

[Cordeiro]

so realistic! awesome!

[Curtis]

Love it mate, Excellent effort put into this.

[Rom_74]

Oh my god!!!
Awesome brushing and design!!
Yellow version is just perfect ;)

[black_death]

JACK IS BACK :eek: :eek:

fuckin amazing concept + brush

i like it very very very very much m8

name it fuckin extreme machine

[Jay]

so realistic! awesome!

Err :confused::rolleyes::D


Amazing style as usuaal.
Really love this one, the reflections are very good.
Your brushing is soo intricate and generally amazing.
Bumblebee one rocks imo.

[hugosilva]

wow awesme,very unrealistic but i guess it wasnt your goal here,the design is hmm extreme dude,awesome brushing,the brush is actually breathtaking,if you plan on do a realistic concept you would have an image that pass as a foto,not very my taste but you done an awesome job

[Aykut_Design]

omg!!!!!!!!!

[kst]

i really scrolled the page 4 times thought i were dreaming :P i even hurted myself to get me out of my wet-dream :P thats very very nice ( and guys i do know i need a gf :P )


When you get next chop ? :I can't wait show some more good work this will get the noobs like me really motivated. !

[winni1990]

Unrealistic? LoL ?

Thats the most realistc brush ive ever seen ! Maybe you think so cause it has a lot of studio. refs ^^

Amazing work, the design is very cool, but there are everywhere jagged lines in the big versions, fix that and it will be perfect ^^


CheerZ

Winni

[Nemesis]

Wow Fuckin Insane!!!!

[P R I d E ² || V!sions]

im stunned ... really nice ...

[DuFFers]

nice chop, looks like a big car is doing a lil shit of a smaller car! lol (sorry)

great brushing relfections are geat! wish the wheels could be bigger tho

but fantastic job well done ! :)

[NOSFan_05]

Ohhh kurwa
Damn, its awesome.
HoF, its soo real and the brushing is perfect.

[GX.Weskay]

oh my goood boy you´re too good for intermediate...this must be adv or HoF. I really like that one everything is so realistic, just unbelievable

wanna see moooore

[sidi]

good work
I dont now what say

[A-Works]

damn nice.
amazing actually, only fix the things you know are wrong and this could hof, if you ask me!!

[stjoseph1903]

i'm just speechless .................................

[Legolas]

wat a hell is this?!

great brushnig dude...looks a tad unreal but damn you rock!

[batuhan_15]

omg that's awesome man keep it up...

[LillGrafo]

WOOOOOOOW. Fck, I dont got word for it :O.

[gpc_design]

The brush are amazing, a agrresive desgin but its very ugly, i think.

There so much thing in the rear. There are overflow....

i don like it

200sxcustoms------->Guile

[X2Core]

great work, not great but amazing. i enjoy your work.

[Gaz-O]

Damn that's hot. O.o
In my opinion the brush screams HOF but the design ruins it, it's pretty ugly. :/

[NOM15]

Okay...


I haven't been posting a lot replies lately but after looking at your chop
for the past 10 minutes it would be rude not to. This is definitely one of
the best chops I've seen. Sure, the design is definately controversial, I for
one would have gone for a smaller green house and bigger arches/wheels
but it looks pretty dope as it is (in its own, unique way). I love the studio
environment and highlights. Did you by any chance use Lamborghini pics
as references?

The only thing I can criticize (that isn't based on personal opinion and/or taste)
would be the shadow. The lack of shadow under the rear bumper makes the car
look ridiculously low and gives it a floaty -feel, same thing goes for the shadow
up front, under the front bumper.

I don't mind though, I could stare at this all day.


HoF

[CM]

fukin insane !!! :-0 :D



CM.

[AcidburN]

I dont even care about the jagged lines, it kinda suits yer style:) Brushing is really good.

HOF

[REW]

HOF.

Truly amazing work, about time something gets into HOF and this deserves it more as anything on this forum right now.

[Glacius]

Okay...


I haven't been posting a lot replies lately but after looking at your chop
for the past 10 minutes it would be rude not to. This is definitely one of
the best chops I've seen. Sure, the design is definately controversial, I for
one would have gone for a smaller green house and bigger arches/wheels
but it looks pretty dope as it is (in its own, unique way). I love the studio
environment and highlights. Did you by any chance use Lamborghini pics
as references?

The only thing I can criticize (that isn't based on personal opinion and/or taste)
would be the shadow. The lack of shadow under the rear bumper makes the car
look ridiculously low and gives it a floaty -feel, same thing goes for the shadow
up front, under the front bumper.

I don't mind though, I could stare at this all day.


HoF


+++++++++

I couldt agree more and your ADVANCE so dont post her ;)

glac

[HellSpawN]

agree with above
deffo HOF
awesome brushing!! :o

[stuFFi.]

Speechless. :eek:

Simply Hall of Fame.

[Jordanian Heart]

:eek: :eek: :eek:

wow that is fuckin crazy style ..

man you should be in advance

the brushing is dam nice

[crokillah]

OMG realy amazing chop man is total unrealistic but WOW :D

[Stealth_]

Wow!
The designing surely splits opinions, but i think it looks über good!
The arches and wheels could be bigger, and the roof could be slower, but its very good anyway. The brushing is fantastic, and the lighting and reflections are just spot on! I like
the orange, most as it brings the futuristic design up, and the rims on it are great too.


HoF.

[nordic man]

damn dude...
won't even whine bacasue the problem it has because it's mentioned already...
the style , brushing and reflections ...
make this dude advanced ...
now!

[disco stu]

Your work is amazing, and still improving

The WIP's have helped me understand how you get to the final chop better so a thankyou is in order there as well.

His next chop will be advanced quality, so why not put him in the correct showroom?

[Rick]

Advanced and Hall Of Fame, your skill has to be among the top 3 users on this forum. IAC, Glac , You

It's massive Jack, I bloody love it

[BraveR [RVT]]

Freaky awesome work mate.It looks like 3d rendering!Maybe ass looks too big, but it is insane work...

[crazyturk42]

finaly after 2 weeks my pc is fixed and the first thing i see is this amazing chop!!


EDIT:

advance and HOF

[Rain004]

Hall of Fame!!!

[FabZ]

excellent attention to detail.. def. worthy of the advanced showroom.

[Jack85]

Well guys, i really didn't expected so many positive comments, and as Stjoseph wrote, i'm really speechless... i known that strange design would have divided the feelings about it, but, wow, read HoF from so many, and even from the keyboards of vtuner like NOM15, Glac, REW is just amazing. Anyway i'm not "ignoring" the other feedbacks of course, like those of Hugosilva o Naj, they're important as every single post in this thread for me, to improve as much as possible, so thanks to all!

This evening i'm going to post a little update, with new&larger rims, and a little bit less jagged (i hope at least :P ).

Okay...
Did you by any chance use Lamborghini pics


Hit&sunked, eheh! :D When i was more or less at the end of the work, i found a image of a Galalrdo, with strong white reflection over it in a studio enviroment, and that gave me the last touch which really changed everything; before the car looked glossy.

Thanks to all of you again, and keep feedbacks coming m8s! ;)

[Igorek]

someone wake me up plz ;) cuz i'm dreaming

[Ashurnishishi]

Damn this looks great! I like orange version most. Just amazing style and brushing skills. This is HOF stuff

[kst]

i can't wait till the update perhaps make it with a nice background ? less studio-ish XD

[Davyke]

you really should go post in advanced section dude!
it's just awesome, crazy brushing style!!!

[kav99]

i reacon thats advanced

[eco.]

Hall of fame what???


He sucks!!!

Just kidding....only one word AMAZING, i love your brushing skilz and i love also the extrime style, it's a concept is rigth to go much extreme as you can, keep it up

***ADVACED NOW***

Grande jack

[Jeremy the Bear]

That really is amazing, but it almost seems like the rear wheel is too small. but thats just my opinion. I love it though. My mom owns a fortwo.

[buckas]

wow awesme,very unrealistic but i guess it wasnt your goal here,the design is hmm extreme dude,awesome brushing,the brush is actually breathtaking,if you plan on do a realistic concept you would have an image that pass as a foto,not very my taste but you done an awesome job

+1

one thing, no reflection in the side mirror ;)

[Mr Junk]

Wow. I expected this kind of work in the advanced room.

[Tony Riley]

Okay...


I haven't been posting a lot replies lately but after looking at your chop
for the past 10 minutes it would be rude not to. This is definitely one of
the best chops I've seen. Sure, the design is definately controversial, I for
one would have gone for a smaller green house and bigger arches/wheels
but it looks pretty dope as it is (in its own, unique way). I love the studio
environment and highlights. Did you by any chance use Lamborghini pics
as references?

The only thing I can criticize (that isn't based on personal opinion and/or taste)
would be the shadow. The lack of shadow under the rear bumper makes the car
look ridiculously low and gives it a floaty -feel, same thing goes for the shadow
up front, under the front bumper.

I don't mind though, I could stare at this all day.


HoF

The same applies to myself. I haven't posted any opinions lately, and
quite frankly I haven't been keeping up with things, but I have not been
so moved to reply until now.

Yes, I agree that the design is a love it or hate it thing. I think trivial
opinions regarding taste are just that - they are trivial, at this point in time.
Because, the quality and the means by which you have presented this
can speak for themselves.

I usually reserve what I am about to say for things that stick out, and probably
will continue to stick with me. I believe this should be moved to HOF.

It is an absolute gem in a sea of trends and fads.
Of course, orange is best.

[Xr4i]

woooohaaaa, great work, design is more like Giger (aliens and stuff), but looks quite real for something that extremely extreme....

[hugosilva]

one thing is for shure,for how many time we dont have a chop moved to HOF.i think its about time to update it

[Campbell13]

Hof!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

[DuFFers]

someone get round to moving this :D lol

[Pi$ci]

are you for reall?????? this chop is THE SEX!!!! WOW what brushing skills, I personnally dont like the shape of the car, but wow this is above intermediate mate!

keep that up dude!

[Jack85]

someone get round to moving this :D lol

Lol, would be a dream come true! XD
Anyhow rim-update in the first post, but i'll have to put inside them some brakes... :P

[Pi$ci]

second rim set for the win...the other seems that the center part isnt centerd really...but wow what a HIGH RES!!!!!

just awsome!! aaaaaawsome

[Digimods]

Congrats for the HOF nomination.

Awesome work.

[hugosilva]

congratulations mate,it deserves,now where do you get your rims from theyre awesome,can i have them???

[Wrofee]

Congratulations

[DuFFers]

gongratz !!!! derserves to be here :D :D :D

\o/

[disco stu]

This got moved to HOF then, it deserves it

I'm not going to comment the chop again, just say congrats on the HOF-worthy entry

[tuna]

Congrats mate.
Definitely deserve this.

[Glacius]

about time > -<

good work jack you know i like ;) stunning as usuall attention to detail is amazing, and tis by far more realistic then anyone else could do ;) good work

glac

[Jack85]

O_o OMG, I'm, i'm... i have no words, i can only say THANKS for this GREAT nomination, i'm just honored to have entered this section of this forum... wow... XD thanks again to everyone (and especially to Glac eheh, thank you m8!), i really don't know else what to say!

@Hugosilva: thank you man, and about rims, as i wrote i've made them in 3d with a program that i use at work, simply the best way to get the perfect rim with perfect enviroment, lights and resolution, eheh! :D For the one with 3 spokes i took inspiration from the "Lowenhart LSR". ;)

[black_death]

congratulations man u really deserver HOF

new rims are nice :D :D

[ollite20]

I've been trying to thinkg of something to say about this one for a few days now but
nothing seems to come out,...

The design sure is very interesting but for me the lighting on it is the most spectacular bit!

Congrats on getting it into the HOF!

*saved to my screensaver folder*

[KagePusher]

Yep deffenelty deserves to be here :D Keep em coming. Your work is just magnificent, the details, and time you spend on them are admireable.

[GX.Weskay]

you deserve it m8 that car kicks ass....congrats :)

[kst]

hell yeah!!! congrats m8 when you get a movie of yourself and a fanpage ? what about a nice vid tut of you redering a car :D ^^. But again those Merc rims rock :D

[hugosilva]

@Hugosilva: thank you man, and about rims, as i wrote i've made them in 3d with a program that i use at work, simply the best way to get the perfect rim with perfect enviroment, lights and resolution, eheh! :D For the one with 3 spokes i took inspiration from the "Lowenhart LSR". ;)

uhhm never tought about that, cool
"""opens strata 3d cx and starts modeling some rims"""

[cpt-tune]

omg this iis awsome brush, ge8 skills man!!!!

[jalle3]

O..o WOW thats fucking awsome its inzane love it dude nice design

[aboo]

Wow! Awesome! :O

[Pi$ci]

wow man! from Intermediate to hall of fame!!

RESPECT dude! TOTAL respect!!

[CJ_FALCON]

OVERALY Great Work :) RESPECT!

But bodykit is litlle mased up :(

[Rick]

wow man! from Intermediate to hall of fame!!

thus been done, was normal back in the days.. :)

[Pi$ci]

thus been done, was normal back in the days.. :)

yeah? cool! I'm not here long enough as that I could say that...just wondered :)


I think that this is motivating some people, because there hasnt been HOF threads since a long time ago right? I thought that there would be only VERYVERYVERY advanced ADVANCED members, but I was wrong:) that's pretty cool i think!

enough off topic :D

Again man, you deserve it!!!!!

[black_death]

will jack start posting in adv???

[kitters]

Really nice work!
the rims are wy to small imo.

the design looks great.
paint too.

[denko]

that is sure the most virtual car here :O

[sjacob]

awesome work man, love them reflections.

and SWEET MOTHER -O- GOD. that pickup on your site is like O_O.


!!!!!!!!yes!!!!!!!!!

[aLFaDaRK]

I usually don't post on advanced or HOF chops because there's already enough replies to them, but I just had to for this. This is one of the most insane, realistic (for its level of extremeity), stunningly amazing designs and brushes that I have ever seen. That is all.

[Jack85]

Thank you again m8s, and another "little update":

WHITE Ver.
Click for High-Res (http://www.funfarm.it/vt/smartwhite.jpg)

And also updated Bumblebee ver. whit new rims and exhaust. ;)
Soon i'll update also the 800px images with these mods, so stay tuned!

[kst]

the right exhaust is not quit in perspective i think but omg White for the win!!! very very nice

[black_death]

white version is very nice

but why did u remove the lights

[palmer91]

AMAZING!!! the white version is the best imo

[Dani]

Oooooh myyyy goooood :eek:

What's this? :D That's absolutely sick. Good Job man.

[FakeMasta]

Wooooooooooooooow,
that's very very awsome,
your brushing is the best i've ever seen,
great job!!
how much time did it take to do this?

[skyhigh90210]

I love the white version the most.

[kst]

put back the tail lights on the white version maybe make it lexuslook taillights that will be much hotter

[Mr.O]

That is so cool. Great job men!!!!!!!!!!

[Highlander007]

That is THEE best brushing i have ever seen, ever! Its f***ing incredible and so realistic, you should take this shit up as a carrer m8 youll go places!



WOW!!!

[eco.]

You crazy Jack, love also the white version.

[deli_yusuf]

realistic awesome!
:S

[tinymat]

one simple word..............WOOOOOOOOOOOOWEEEEEEEEE inever knew a smartcar could look GOOD

[Lukeshthegreat]

not to my taste but very very very well executed mate

[ipekka!]

shit man! wonderful!:D

[Zammo]

Amazing brushing skillz not my taste but

[rst]

:O (10 charectors....)

[Dentzo ArtVVork]

haha thats just sick. Very cool.. not much of the orignal car left hehe

[Noobratte]

whoooooottt``??????

great man...


best fake ever....

[fasion]

cant see ther finished pictures :(

[ashb]

HOLY MOTHER OF GOD *falls outta chair*

[milk4]

wow,i love it!

[Dru Hill]

great :eek:

[fatgoat]

wow man !!!!
that yellow one just about knocked me off my seat, i knew you had skills, but damn ..very hot!!!

[chopaholic18]

Htf Did U Do That M8??

[Briktop]

some 1 get me a box of tissues xD lol, very sexy, would buy it if real!! awsome show skill!!

[suvaRi]

wooooooovvvv u are too crazy man bun ı cant learn this :(