vespa for motorbike competition

[Fieryidris]

it has taken a whole day to do the colouring - i hadn't tried doing this before and didn't realise it would take so long.

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/9176/vespa203vy.jpg


i now have the worlds worst headache so be careful and don't say it's crap.

[stuFFi.]

That looks..umm, different. But I seriously like it!
Everyone can see the effort you put in, and "reflections",
if we can call it that way plus coloring is amazing!
But, all the lines are jagged and that's the only problem
I see. I suggest to use the pentool!
Here you find one help for it, hope the author doesn't mind showing it.
http://www.deviantart.com/view/19028193/
Thanks to donbenni, you the man!

Some kind of "pimp-ish" background would be great.
Maybe the sketch of something, that was very stylish
there or reminds of that time the Vespa was built.
Really, that would rule!
But, I really feel with it, coloring is excellent..
try to use the pentool, that'll helps you fo'sure!
Keep it up..

[Fieryidris]

i don't have photoshop so i am using the pen tool in paint shop pro but i didnt have a very big picture to start from so it has been difficult to get smooth edges everywhere.

the original background was a greyish studio background and i don't really want to spoil what i have done by trying to do something different to it.



thankyou for your comments though , i appreciate them. :)


i still have the lines as two separate layers over the colouring at the moment so maybe i will have another go at doing them tomorrow if i feel like it , but i'm not certain i can really improve it very much.

[Sean]

Looks good. Colouring is great. As said lines are a little edgy.

Overall nice work.

[JonnyJ]

As alredy said edgey lines, but the overall toon is beautiful :)

Nice Work some very nice details too